♥Done my PP♥ but will I pass??

Remember my earlier comments of PP --> ♥Done my PP & Happy bday to syak♥.
I had done my PP today. Will I pass this time? :) *hope so* *nervous* :S
They just continue from the last comments. So I just copy and paste. *Can don't need to go to the link.* Haha. LOL.

So will I pass? *cross finger* :S

*Blue - 1st time*
*Red - 2nd time which is today*

Advisor Comments: could have sounded more enthusiastic/2nd Assessment: Whilst still referrring to notes occasionally, Cindy appears more confident in her presentation. She elaborates with examples. Has done more analysis via SWOT, including the marketing mix and done a competitive comparison. She is a reflective learner.

Assessor 1 Comments: Student can be more confident during presentation. SWOT can include more personal insights rather than information from the Internet. Research done can be more in depth./2nd assessment>> You seem to have improved from the first assessment in terms of market comparison and SWOT analysis.Could have made stronger recommendations.

Assessor 2 Comments: The student would do well to narrow down her analysis to just a particular product or market since Hitachi produces a wide range of products. Furthermore, there is no explicit recommendations given in her report. When prompted for recommendations, she recommended traditional advertising which is not wrong so long as she explicitly has it in her presentations in the first place. However traditional advertising is still vague as that is a recommendation that can easily apply to every single other line./--Second accessment: Though a bit nervous at presentation, the student made most of her points clear.